Well I thought it was good, but not quite elite. The opening line was about average and seemed like a work in progress, but I think it is generally under rated by folks here. Some of the more promising sections just weren't well integrated into the overall story line yet. And speaking of the story line, it started off pretty weak, but by the end the writer seemed to finally get it and the story line seemed pretty solid.
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Merry Christmas y'all. Here's to another year of the best damn forum on the web.
-bsd