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Post subject: A haiku 4 u  Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 8:34 am |
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 10:48 am |
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That was painful.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 10:58 am |
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HawksFTW wrote: That was painful. You missed the thread point All are meant to be haiku That was painful to me
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 10:59 am |
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Aren't Haiku's supposed to follow a 5-7-5 syllable format? I prefer limericks.
There once was a poster Pehawk
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Well, you get the idea.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:07 am |
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JSeahawks is right for once. the OP was not a haiku. Neither was Sarlaac's.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:18 am |
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:37 am |
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peachesenregalia wrote: JSeahawks is right for once. the OP was not a haiku. Neither was Sarlaac's. Dammit, I typed painful instead of pain.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:41 am |
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JSeahawks wrote: Aren't Haiku's supposed to follow a 5-7-5 syllable format? The whole 5-7-5 syllable is a American/Westernized simplification of haiku. The 17 morae used in haiku are more based on stress and timing, which is similar but not the same as syllabic units. More important than the number of morae used, is really the image and juxapositioning of each line, and the fact that most haikus are traditionally framed by a specific season of the year. So while just about anyone (except apparently the people in this thread) can count off 5-7-5 syllables on their fingers and break them into three lines, it doesn't necessarily make it a haiku. _________________ cboom wrote: Wilson is the worst QB I have seen as a Hawks fan. And I have been around long enough to see them all.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:43 am |
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HawksFTW wrote: JSeahawks wrote: Aren't Haiku's supposed to follow a 5-7-5 syllable format? The whole 5-7-5 syllable is a American/Westernized simplification of haiku. The 17 morae used in haiku are more based on stress and timing, which is similar but not the same as syllabic units. More important than the number of morae used, is really the image and juxapositioning of each line, and the fact that most haikus are traditionally framed by a specific season of the year. So while just about anyone (except apparently the people in this thread) can count off 5-7-5 syllables on their fingers and break them into three lines, it doesn't necessarily make it a haiku. I'm glad someone else explained this because I knew about the season stuff, but damned if I could explain it simply. Also, I can't count on my fingers.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 12:05 pm |
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 2:43 pm |
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My Haikus suck bad
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Stop now bad Haiku
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 3:50 pm |
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SeAhAwKeR4life wrote: Russell Wilson GOOD!
Hawks Defense amazing tough
Forty-niner fails
Hawks division win
Harby cries fowl; is b****
Hawks win Superbowl
My Haikus suck bad
Still you read them who is fool?
Stop now bad Haiku These reads in my head like a Russian trying to speak broken English. "My love for you is like a truck!" _________________ cboom wrote: Wilson is the worst QB I have seen as a Hawks fan. And I have been around long enough to see them all.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:48 am |
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In Chem140 in Pierce College (Tacoma), one of the questions on the mid-term was to compose a chemistry haiku. My response (which also hit the seasonal thing):
Covalent bonding
Lovers on a sweet spring night
Exchanging charges
Seahawks related:
DangeRuss Wilson
Too short to throw a football
Autumn disagrees
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:02 pm |
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OK, these suck but maybe not as bad...
Russell Wilson Shines
Seahawks Defense tough as nails
The league is fearful
Autumn wind a Seahawk
Preys on teams like fierce raptor
Tears teams asunder!
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:26 pm |
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Poems are so gay
So, so, very, very gay
We are all gay now
(Just kidding, kind of)
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 5:50 pm |
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Actually, it's supposed to have 17 on. On's are not syllables. For example, Nippon has 4 ons, but is only two syllables. Aeons was a bit murkier. Was that 4 ons or 3? so I basically said F it and wrote the Haiku how I damn well wanted.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 8:07 am |
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HawksFTW wrote: SeAhAwKeR4life wrote: Russell Wilson GOOD!
Hawks Defense amazing tough
Forty-niner fails
Hawks division win
Harby cries fowl; is b****
Hawks win Superbowl
My Haikus suck bad
Still you read them who is fool?
Stop now bad Haiku These reads in my head like a Russian trying to speak broken English. "My love for you is like a truck!" Brought to you by Chevrolet.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 9:06 am |
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SalishHawkFan wrote: Actually, it's supposed to have 17 on. On's are not syllables. For example, Nippon has 4 ons, but is only two syllables. Aeons was a bit murkier. Was that 4 ons or 3? so I basically said F it and wrote the Haiku how I damn well wanted. Ons and morae are the same thing, so I am not sure what you are getting at. For what it is worth, I am not Japanese nor am I a poetry scholar, but I do have some experience with it. My wife wrote poetry for years and years, so I have picked up a handful of things over that time. Jane Reichold once did a study on haiku, and determined there to be 65 "rules" for writing a haiku. The funny part is, many of the rules directly contradict each other. So in the end, the sentiment of just saying screw it, and writing it how you want, is not necessarily a bad route to take.  _________________ cboom wrote: Wilson is the worst QB I have seen as a Hawks fan. And I have been around long enough to see them all.
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:27 am |
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SalishHawkFan wrote: Actually, it's supposed to have 17 on. On's are not syllables. For example, Nippon has 4 ons, but is only two syllables. Aeons was a bit murkier. Was that 4 ons or 3? so I basically said F it and wrote the Haiku how I damn well wanted. Looks like you got your basic aeon flux here...
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Post subject: Re: A haiku 4 u Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:51 am |
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